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Ebb & Flow
She wanted to have a picnic on the beach. Ugk. I hate sand. It gets everywhere and stays forever. It gets in shoes, socks, undisclosed locations. How does it infiltrate everything? Sand and food are a horrible combination. Kay smiled, and I melted.
We took off our shoes and frolicked. We drew pictures in the sand and laughed as the ocean washed them away. We wrote our names together. I didn’t mind the too literal sandwich or even the sand in those undisclosed locations.
That day, I wrote her name on my heart. She wrote my name in the sand.
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For anybody who noticed or wondered why I haven’t been participating, I have been out with Eustachian Tube Dysfunction which in my case is most likely the result of allergies. It’s a fluid build-up in the sinuses that shoots the equilibrium to hell. I have mild allergies that present as mild sinus irritation when the weather changes. I drink some tea and ignore it. This fluid could have been accumulating for years.
Certain movement or triggers made me dizzy and queasy and ruined my day. Bending over or looking down too much, especially down and up repeatedly were bad. My computer was horrible. I couldn’t look at it for more than a few minutes at a time. Imagine all the writing I got done. Most days, I could do most normal things like work out, clean, and take care of the dogs. My phone didn’t bother be most of the time, but five minutes on the computer laid me out for the day. The last Friday Fictioneers I did, one month ago today, took me all day to do, and I had to take a nap in the middle. I’ve watched a lot of movies. I now realize why I never bothered to watch past Terminator 2. That’s where the series should have… Terminated.
I initially thought it was an ear infection. I flushed and rested and took some allergy medication. After two weeks, I went to the doctor who recommended stronger allergy medication for two weeks. I was also given “exercises” to do. I work out regularly, so it’s hard to consider lying in bed in different positions as exercise unless I count fighting the dogs for bed space. If that didn’t work, I was to take steroids for another week. Today’s my last day of steroids.
I’m going to try to reciprocate all comments, but I’m not sure how much I’m going to be able to do. My apologies if it takes a while. This is by far the longest I’ve been on my computer in over a month, and I’ve had to take breaks. I’m trying to ease back in. Making it this far, I’ve been using my computer on and off for about two hours, is a huge victory. I’m going to go watch a movie. I’ll be back!
Great last line
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Thank you.
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I’m with Neil, great last line! So sorry you’ve had health troubles. Hoping they fully subside soon.
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Thank you and thank you and thank you. I think the worst is over. I just have to remember not to push myself too hard. I don’t get sick often, and I forget that part of recovery.
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YWx3
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Plus, sand is not great if your suffering from allergies! Good to see you back, hope your health continues to improve.
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My undisclosed locations are especially allergic to sand. Thank you.
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A perfectly written tale, down to the final betrayal and loss.
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I don’t know if there was betrayal, but it didn’t go the way he wanted. Thank you.
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Oh, dear, that sounds awful. I do get vertigo and balance issues from the old brain injury so I can understand. Glad to see you back with us, though. Loved your story.
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I’m fortunate that it’s temporary… I hope. I can’t imagine it being chronic. Thank you.
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I still have occasional spells, but I’ve learned to live with them.
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Oh that last line is a punch in the gut! Well done for one who has been suffering as you have! Hope things settle soon!
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That’s how I wanted to return with sneaky gut punches. You know, spread the suffering around. I am feeling much better. Thank you.
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Ya done good. And I am glad you are feeling better.
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This took me back to several differing beaches, I did enjoy reading this, I hope the vertigo settles down.
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When I lived on the coast, I visited many beaches too. I miss that. Thank you.
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p.s. Charlie is looking sooooo cute this week ❤
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These dogs are ridiculously photogenic. It’s nice of them to provide me with an endless supply of photos.
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I guess she now owns him and treats him accordingly? For someone not well, you did a fabulous job with this story. 😀
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I was thinking more that she moved on, and he was virtually forgotten. I appreciate the fabulous, even though it comes with a qualifier.
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That beetch! You know what to do with the doodoo. 😀
BTW great story, no qualifier.
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So beautiful and romantic. I hope you’re gettng well soon.
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Thank you. I am making huge strides toward being well. Thank you.
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Love the last line.
Pow!
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Gotta hit ’em with the ending. Thank you. Thanks for the picture, too. It’s quite inspirational.
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Touching the heartstrings with your words in this story, Nobbinmaug.
WOW … last line. Be Safe 😷 … Isadora 😎
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Thank you, Isadora. It’s always nice to know one’s writing can evoke emotion.
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A lovely day with a sad ending. A fantastic last line. I hope that you are feeling better very soon!
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All good things come to an end. I hope that applies to bad things as well. Thank you.
I am feeling much better even since posting this. Thank you, again.
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Oh Nobbin…yes you get an Oh…
Beautifully written with a magnificently subtle sucker punch at the end. Five sand-buckets.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS Hope you’re feeling much better soon.
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Oh yeah! An Oh and five sand-buckets. I will take that as a welcome back. Thank you, Rochelle.
PS – I am feeling much, much better. That last dose must have packed its own sucker punch. It seemed to have knocked out all the lingering ailments.
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It’s good to have you back. I’m sorry you’ve been so miserable, though. I enjoyed your story very much. Now go back to bed, or get another cup of tea, and relax 🙂
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Thank you, Linda. It is wonderful to be back. I’ve never wanted to write so much as when I couldn’t. I have improved immensely even since this post.
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed my story. It’s good to know I could knock off the rust that quickly.
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So glad you’re better 🙂
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Get well soon. My wife used to swear by hot garlic and chicken soup for every ailment, It always worked–I wonder why? (This is not a recommendation just my experience). Take care and keep writing.
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I read there is some science behind chicken noodle soup for sinus issues. It opens up the sinuses, which helps with healing. I think garlic is the same theory. I don’t know about much beyond the sinuses though. I am feeling much better. Thank you.
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I hope you feel better soon. Thank you for taking the time to share this story and what you are going through at the same time. Beautiful story.
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Thank you for the well wishes and compliment on the story. I am feeling much better.
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