Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields who provides us with a photo prompt. Each week’s challenge is to write a 100-word story inspired by the photo. Click here to play along or just read more stories.
Walking In Staten
Staten Island’s annual week-long Greek Jewish Festival was back. Pete Davidson and Wu-Tang Clan were performing. It was the perfect time to take my daughter out for some culture, Kosher Gyros, and Wu.
Someone in the throng bumped me. I turned to notice Hannah was gone. The world tilted. I broke into a sweat. Sounds were garbled. My stomach turned.
I heard the muffled cries of children, “Dad!” “Daddy!” Every one was attached to an adult, and none were Hannah.
A tug on my shirt led to a smiling face and a pointing finger. “Daddy, may we get ice cream?”
At least it certainly worked out so well after a false alarm
LikeLiked by 1 person
True, but nobody wants that scare.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Until now I had never once heard of Staten Island referred to only as Staten
LikeLiked by 1 person
I grew up hearing of it referred to as “Shaolin.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
A heart-stopping moment
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m sure a moment that seems like an eternity.
LikeLike
I soooo know that moment. Very well described.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think it’s universal. I don’t even have kids, and I know it. Thank you.
LikeLike
Thank goodness that ended well. A parent’s worst nightmare.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It is indeed a parent’s worst nightmare, but I would guess (hope) 99% of the time it ends like this. It’s the other 1% that makes it scary.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That moment – the sheer terror so well described!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLike
My heart was in my throat! Thank goodness this had a happy ending. Excellent use of the prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s what I was going for. Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊
LikeLiked by 2 people
Been there a few times. I have a grandson who has been rescued by customer service so often, it became the norm and family joke. Well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
My goddaughter used to hide from me in stores. I had to get firm with her. “Walmart people will take you and probably eat you.” Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I never thought of that. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Phew, had me worried!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Kids are good at that.
LikeLike
Yikes. And I am sure Hannah has no idea why Daddy is a little upset…
LikeLiked by 1 person
No, nor why he’s suddenly happy and scared and clingy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Nobbin,
What parent hasn’t experienced that moment of panic? My youngest son was really adept at disappearing and giving me near heart failure. I ended up getting a leash for him. Don’t judge me. At any rate, I felt a rush of relief at the end of your story. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
I remember the first time I saw kids on leashes. It was in an airport. I was shocked and appalled and thought it was the funniest thing I had ever seen. I said to my friend, “Got leash?” I must have stared because the mother looked at me like “Wait till you have kids.” Kid leashes still make me laugh.
Anyway, I’m glad I could bring you into the story a make you feel genuine concern. Thank you, Rochelle.
LikeLike
As already mentioned, the experience you describe so accurately is not uncommon – sheer terror and disorientation. I can also relate to the ‘daddy’ calls that are all around but belong to other people’s children. In my case, of course, it’s ‘Mum’ I hear, and even though my children are now mothers themselves, I often find myself reacting instinctively to another child calling for her mum.
LikeLiked by 1 person
When I was a kid, my mom told me if we got separated to call her by her name, not “Mom” because every woman in the place would turn her head.
Thank you. I’m glad to know I accurately captured the parental perspective.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A heart stopping moment. It is worse when as my daughter did, she wander off in a large shop and sat down out of sight to look through a book-so silently.
LikeLiked by 1 person
My goddaughter used to hide from me in stores. She thought it was so funny. It wasn’t.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Scary story, cute video.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 2 people
You’re welcome.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Every parent’s nightmare. They can disappear so quick.
The video is blocked… porn? 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah, but the kids they want to get rid of never seem to get taken.
Yep. Try setting your VPN to America.
LikeLiked by 2 people