Rewriting Puberty

Yesterday, I finished my latest rereading/rewriting of The L Squad. I’ve long since lost count of how many times I’ve read through it. It’s been awhile since my last full reading. I can’t believe how many changes I made. I expected to find a lot of typos. In the end, following Ragnarök, Armageddon, the apocalypse, Revelation, whatever you want to call it, there will be cockroaches and typos. After all the times I’ve considered it done, I didn’t expect to make so many changes, big, small, additions, subtractions, rewordings, breaking up paragraphs and chapters, etc…

The book is still largely the same. Anyone who’s read it before might not even notice the changes. It’s more like it’s gone through puberty. It’s a little hairier, but I hope I’ve removed, at least, most of the blemishes.

Comma Coma

I’ve decided that comma usage is like fingerprints. No two person’s are the same. If there ever was a standard, it died long ago. It’s ghost haunts and tortures us.

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